My special day

I woke up knowing that it was a special day. It was my 16th birthday. I felt quite excited. Then I heard the post arrive. I ran downstairs to collect all my cards but there weren't any. I was really fed up.
I spent the rest of the day waiting for the phone to ring. I couldn't understand why all my friends had forgoten my birthday. Eventually, my parents suggested going out to see a film. I couldn't thik of anything better to do so I agreed.
On the way to the cinema, my dad suddenly stoped in front of a smart nightclub. It looked all dark but as we went inside, suddenly the lights came on. I heard lots of people shouting ' Happy Birthday! ' In front of me I could see all my friends standing there in party hats. In the middle of them there was an enormus birthday cake. It was an incredible suprise!

* My English teacher corrected this text.